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A happy child spins in her room,
Her beloved room,
Surrounded by her collection.

Dolls line the walls,
Sit on the floors,
Well-used,
Well-loved,
Knowing they are needed.

But time passes.

The child disappears.

Dust settles.
Cloth dulls and frays.
Faces chip,
Fracture,
Crack,
Forgotten visages of an innocent time.
A younger time.

A past time.

Their owner finally returns:
Older.
Different.
Determined to update her collection,
Ignoring the cracking of porcelain fragments beneath her feet,
The small drops of red on the bottom of her shoes
With each and every stride.

Some remain pristine.
Perfect.
Applicable.
These are not the ones she has come for.

It is those which (or perhaps who) are dusty,
Dark,
Riddled with imperfections
That are taken,
Put aside in a haphazard pile,
Awaiting their fate.

Footsteps resound toward a wall,
Stopping abruptly in front of it.
A squeak of a window being forced open masks the sudden silence,
The tension.

A ruffle of fraying cloth is all that betrays
The push,
The return of the silence,
The nerve-tingling tension.

Until they hit the pavement.

Porcelain explodes upwards
Slicing rags aimlessly,
The staccato crashes a brutal accompaniment as each body hits the pavement,
Timing varying for each,
A high-pitched, horrifying keening
Seeming to echo the deaths.

The inhuman wail dies down as the last body
Smashes against the unyielding ground,
Leaving only a fragile chatter of porcelain
As it returns from its second flight.

Ignoring the carnage,
The innocent, broken forms,
The smears of blood staining the pavement,
She closes the window
And begins to position the replacements,
Happier now, but no longer innocent,
Left to only grow until the next revision is due.

Ready to let once-precious friends to shatter without a thought.
©2007-2010 ~WindWolf7
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Author's Comments

This was mostly just me being all emo about how friends fall apart.

Thaaaat's pretty much it. I had this idea last night before I fell asleep, and I'm bored enough to put it up.

It probably sucks, since I wrote it in about thirty minutes and didn't really go over it all that much. You can critique it if you like, but it's not like I'm not expecting errors.

Oh, and I wasn't sure if this fit better under Human Nature or Horror/Macabre. I just went by the description that DA has to choose, but I'm still not completely sure if it fits as well as it could.

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I liked it. I don't think there's anything wrong with it. Though I have found that sometimes good things come at random, like this, it's very good though you only took a short period of time on a random thought.

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I absolutely hate writing poems, though. I mean, I like the poems themselves, but actually writing 'em is horrible. I always write in spasms... Like, I'll write three words, pause and try to think of a synonym for what I want to say next, and then finally write three more words after five minutes of consideration. ><;

But thanks for the comment~ =D I'm glad it wasn't utter crap.

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:XD: I find poems easy to write, but that's just me. I'm sorry you have such a hard time most times.

You're welcome, it really was good. :D

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